Sunday, October 23, 2005

LV words

The Snail told me about the 55 word story. An entire story has to be written in just 55 words, no more, no less. Here is my attempt...

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Ω - Omega
23X05
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She was waiting there for me with her arms outstretched. The moment that I had been waiting for had finally come. My past was behind me and I had a great new future with her. As I stepped off the ledge without looking back even once, I knew I was finally with my Lady Death.

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α - Alpha
23X05
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I didn’t even remember who I was. I was wet, covered with blood and naked. As I felt myself lifted by the strong blurred man in white, I realized I couldn’t breathe. All the questions ringing in my head were answered when he hit me hard causing me to cry out loud, proclaiming my birth.

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1 comment:

Anonymous said...

these 2 pieces could have a very beautiful positive connotation if read in the order omega followed by alpha... coz one talks about the doc while the other about a new beginning in the mothers arms instead of lady death ;)

great to see u moving away from all black thoughts :))))